Your Gusting Presence

by Chelsey   May 3, 2012


Darling,
if it wasn't against my religion to compare you to God,
I'd say your occurrence is divine; circulating my being
Similar to how the Holy Spirit moves an altar full of sinners

Understand, you grace me with your gusting presence
like wind amongst swaying branches and droopy leaves
Even wilting petals resume their positions
when your breath anoints the brisk air

When some see invisible movement outside their window,
I see the deliverance of my ubiquitous lover
fulfilling his promise of never fleeing or forsaking me

When the breeze separates my strands of hair
I will feel the covenant you have made with me-
you'll always be there despite what we may weather
Before you, sulfurous days once blistered my world
Now I'm forever blessed with your guardian existence

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  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Extremely creative, a truly beautiful piece with a nice flow and very vivid imagery provided.

    Nice work indeed!

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ooooohhhhhh my.....

    I adore poems about love and this is one of my all time favourites, as always the emotion, imagery and flow is just out standing....

    "When the breeze separates my strands of hair
    I will feel the covenant you have made with me-
    you'll always be there despite what we may weather
    Before you, sulfurous days once blistered my world
    Now I'm forever blessed with your guardian existenc"

    ^^^^^THIS though....sigh....any man with a soul would just melt if this was written for him, damm straight!

    Epic write chels damm epic x

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Ah, the sweet words of lovers.
    The world would be a dark place without them.

    Very nice imagery used in this poem, keep it up!

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Very creative and so beautiful! love your choice of words. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Outstanding love poem Chels- A beautiful worded piece...very creative and absolutly wonderful!!

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