Unspoken Goodbye

by Jawwad Zafar   May 22, 2012


Waiting for train, our eyes meet
she was beautiful, honey sweet
No lugagge, nothing to carry
tangled hair, waiting for her ferry

I was lost, deviated from the track
when she smiled, looked me back
Dressed up in purple and yellow
my attraction centre, the lovely fellow

Gathering courage, putting strain
all submerged, as approaches her train
Again she looked, peering through her glasses
I stand still, against restless herding masses

As she step up, to board her train
heart thundered, pumping out pain
I'm strong but this soul is weak
My desperation, reaching it's peak

No words, nothing was exchanged
only she left, everything remained
My incomplete story, incompleted tie
remains her only memory , the unspoken goodbye

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  • 13 years ago

    by Noha

    I luved it! amazing job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by marlon lumangyao

    From the tittle you may guess the insights but it's more when you read it whole. love it nice! the choice of tittle was way too great!

  • 13 years ago

    by Janis

    Very nicely written, can clearly visualize situation of how well you described it and can feel your emotions behind the text. Good job!

    • 13 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      Hey thanx dude for the appreciation...
      Thanxx alot :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Hey bro,
    What a marvel !
    A wonderful description here,in an amazingly moulded words and tuned rhythme...!
    It was a kinda desperation reaching the end of the poetry,nd wow ! "THe Unspoken Goodbye"-Amazing theme!
    I really liked the way u described:
    "Tangled hair, waiting for her ferry,
    Dressed up in purple and yellow,
    Again she looked, peering through her glasses!"
    Ur writings are Unique,nd that forces me to add u in my favourite list !
    Keep Writin,good job !
    Appreciated !!

    • 13 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      Ohh thank you my friend... :)
      and thanks alot for adding me on your favourite list :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Is it possible to say more, yes but I know you understand that perhaps I've said it all :) 5/5

    Very beautifuly written, I could see it all just like a movie,, feeling intertwined as I read like it's me and that's what I'm feeling,,again amazing write

    • 13 years ago

      by Jawwad Zafar

      Thanxx alot.. You appreciate me alot i'm nothing compared to you..

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