Alone again

by Subject Unknown   May 29, 2012


Together forever will never be.
You weren't alone, you had me.
I was your loving slave.
My heart would have followed you to the grave.
Now my life, you cannot save.

I just wrote this. Please leave a comment. Thank you.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Kate

    Ok so personally, dont put the "leave a comment" thing on the bottom... ruins the beauty.
    This is a good poem. Some advice though: the last line where it has the comma, put "..." draws more suspense
    Besides that, awesome

    • 13 years ago

      by Subject Unknown

      Yeah, makes sense. I just like when people rate and comment so I can improve ^.^

      I don't know why but the "..." doesn't look good to me. I understand what you mean though. Thanks for the feedback :)

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