Goodbye

by deadwolf   May 31, 2012


Why should I stay? So I could listen to you tell me how much you cared about him. To hear how much it hurt when he left. We both express how much we cared about each other. But you don't even care I'm leaving. You could have at least said goodbye.

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  • 12 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Tons of emotion, well written indeed. I love it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kate

    Ok, my last comment was beyond idiotic!! I must have been in a bad mood that day... This is an excellent poem. Very relatable... I like it. Very to the point and strong.

  • 13 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Its really hard on the heart when a person doesn't say goodbye :-( this piece reflects the pain and sadness you feel...emotional write... and very powerul

  • 13 years ago

    by Kate

    Hmm... this is good. It's deep but could be a little deeper. Just an idea. Make the reader really understand just how much you were hurt.

    • 13 years ago

      by deadwolf

      Thanks for the advice. I guess I'll try to do better next time.

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