Remember Me

by Mello193   Jun 10, 2012


Just walk
away from this heart
unlock
the secrets of this art
Just fall
away from this dream
dont call
it was never what it seemed

I am the guilty one
I am the unclean fun
Just walk away from this smile
let me hurt for a while
Just go and get out
I wont miss you tonight

everything is momentary
everything is clean
a subtle glance into the mirror
will you remember me

now go
away from this life
just know
your soon to meet the knife
just leave
and never think to look back
just breathe
as your entire world now turns black

I am the unknown one
I am the re-disputed
every lie is now diluted
I am the free form thinker
i am the unknown cry
the long lost begging why?

everything is momentary
everything is clean
a subtle glance into the mirror
will you remember me

This is my nightmare
The sharp side of myself
this is my suicide
I will not cry for help

Just walk
away from this heart
and dream
to neglect what fear we start
and run
away from your actions soaked in gasoline
Just walk
away from everything they pegged it seems

I am the battle cry
I am the unheard voice
this life we had one choice
To deceive everything we conceive

everyone is momentary
everyone is clean
a subtle glance into the mirror
will you remember me

everyone is momentary
everyone is clean
a subtle glance into the mirror
will you remember me

This is my nightmare
The sharp side of myself
this is my suicide
I will not cry for help

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  • 13 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    You should make this into a song, because it is what it reminds me of.

    Typos: In the sixth stanza, there is an 'i' that needs capitalized.

    From what I understand, you are worried about being forgotten. All of us are worried about this one time or another.

    I like the flow that you have here. It is very compelling, and very beautiful in my opinion. Your rhymes are very good. It seems that you wrote this when you were in depressed state, and for that reason I would have put it in the sadness part of PnQ, but maybe it wasn't that sad to you when you wrote it? I have no idea.

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    I hope you are doing ok.

    I like the rhymes in your poem, and I could sense a lost person within your piece.

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