Dungeon of my own feelings

by DarkLight   Jun 16, 2012


My heart is soaked,
in the pain you take.
I dwell in the dungeons of my own fear,
Fear to ever lose you to the ungreatful world.
Jealous,
feeling the inner pain.
The sorrow of an unblinking eye,
saltness from the eyes of my beloved woman.
I adore the scent of your own breath,
The beauty of your heart.
Passionate that inherits my desires,
to ever hold you in my arms forever.
I dare our differences,
To guide us in this journey of our own future.
Success to be our motorcade,
Joy be our morning showers
Happiness be the daily candy of our habits.
We seal the promises with kisses,
as I embrace the warmth of my love.

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  • 13 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Thanx guys u really great..

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    I totaly agreed with P.R abt d spelling mistakes, bt at d same time cant evn ignore d beauty of uor poem..welldone..shanix

  • 13 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Excellent poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: first line "soked" needs to be "soaked." Ninth line, "breathe" needs to be "breath." Twelfth line, "for ever" needs to be "forever." Fourth line "the" needs to be inserted between "to" and "world" to make sense. However, this is your poem and I am just giving my opinion :) trying to help...

    This is a really beautiful poem, Shanix. I was wondering though, why you put this in the cyber love section? It does not seem like this was a love formed over the internet...I was just curious as to why you put it here :] I am not trying to offend you in any way.

    Anyways, very beautiful.
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful written, I can so much relate

    • 13 years ago

      by DarkLight

      It jst happened to b on my mind ....thanx Dag.

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