by 1BrokenBeauty Jun 18, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
You can't break what is already broken- |
by Euphanasia
Great poem |
by Purple Rose
Typos: First line "brake" needs to be "break." Line nine, "it's" is supposed to be "its" and line eleven (second to last) "Im" needs to be "I'm." However, it is your poem and I am just trying to help by giving my opinion :] |