Battlefield

by megan furman   Jun 21, 2012


I gave you a choice,
to stay or to leave,
but once things started getting rough
you left me
you left me to fight a uphill battle
you left me to loose
you left me to die
were you not strong enough?
were you scared?
did you not love me?
what did you want from me?
did I not fill your needs?

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  • 11 years ago

    by megan furman

    Thanks for the help i actually didnt even see those mistakes

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: in the title, 'field' needs to be 'field' and also, the two words need to become one - 'Battlefield.' Fifth line, 'up hill' needs to be 'uphill.' Also, I would capitalize your 'i' in the last line. All of this is up to you, and I am just trying to help :)

    This is a very short, touching poem. I am sorry for all that you have experienced with this 'up hill battle.' I hope that all is well now :(

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jon

    This is really good megan i told you you're a good poet

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