Comments : Is it

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Well, I liked this poem Omar!
    You speak from your Heart.
    I hope you get this lady!
    (she'll be the lucky one!)

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Well, I liked this poem Omar!
    You speak from your Heart.
    I hope you get this lady!
    (she'll be the lucky one!)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tanya

    I love this poem because its quite cute

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    Nice poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great Omar! Keep on penning.
    Just I've an advice:
    I done really know what it is,
    should be
    I don't really know what it is,
    I guess I;m right, yes?
    This is aside, But I really enjoyed the flow
    Thank you
    ...Khalid...

  • 11 years ago

    by amanda

    Good job Omar! -just one suggestion, on the line
    -is it your blue ocean like eyes,
    how about something like
    -is it you ocean blue eyes,
    just for some more flow. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Reyna

    This is great your off to a good start :)

  • 11 years ago

    by losing myself

    As i read your poems, i like how i can picture it inside my head, great imagery :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Omar

    Thank you for all of your comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Nice write Omar, Keep reading and writing.
    Peace and Blessings

  • 11 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really like it! the imagery is great and very good for a first poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    I loved it. There's a simplicity that I love about it; almost an innocent and childish love that can grow to become stronger. 5/5 definitely

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is very sweet and good for your first write.

    keep writing and you will always improve! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This is pretty good, I like it.