Comments : My dream after she left

  • 9 years ago

    by mandy

    Absolutely amazing write, 5/5.

    "planting seeds of hope she'll come back"
    - Great last line, was this in the form of a vase?

    mandy :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      Thank you Mandy! Oh yes! I made the poem in the form of vase. Also, I've a quote dated 13/05/2012 concerning that. You can see it and give yr opinion! Thank you.

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    Beautiful piece Khalid.I loved the format.

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicelly Penned!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Sad still beautifully written poem, touches the heart if you let it :) Awesome