Congrats on this unique poem, Liz! I love it!

This is pretty neat.. it may be jumbled but you can actually read it pretty well & normal when you go through it. Congrats on your win!

I am glad you won Liz!Congrats!

This is a very creative approach to poetry, I loved it!

Congratulations, beauty.

Dis is great...Very great...I love dis...

This is very interesting:)

Ah, very creative indeed, I absultely love this. . its sooooo excelltnt so no wonder why it won :DD

Nice work , well deserved win too :)

Thats illl ^___^

Comments from judging:

What a creative piece, I absolutely loved the guts this girl had behind writing this piece. I had no struggle at all while reading the poem and love that there was such a beautiful message behind it! The fact that things are cloudy and being with him makes everything clear is pretty unique, because typically it's the kiss that leaves us breathless and clouded. What a fun and unique write, I adore this!

I love the creativity!!! Great poem too! :)

Yes this was very creative, sweet and just brilliant!