Comments : Great Expectations

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    'out' = 'our'?

  • 13 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Third Stanza: "let our bodies be used and out.."

    ^^ "Out" seems to be a typo!

    Nicely written piece!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Love the lines you wrote~

    Love is a secret
    no one ever spoke of,
    but somehow it's inside
    our hearts.

    Filled with emotion. 5/5!

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Love is a secret
    no one ever spoke of,
    but somehow it's inside
    our hearts.

    A very good opening to your poem! It is indeed a secret that none speak of. It is also the fuel which makes people act and do things that are so strange too!

    Liked the read and liked the message behind this write :)

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    LOVED this poem, so nicely written. 5/5