Awakening - Average Thoughts and Karla Bardanza

by Karla   Jul 13, 2012


I can no longer sit
in
the shade of silence;
your eyes have stolen
the only friend I had.

When everything dreamt in me
and my poetry slept in my hands,
you brought time
back again.

I was drizzling
over
my lake of shadows,
until your voice
shone on my drowning past.

The veil of the moon fell
and I dissolved myself
in the black pool hidden
in your iris
full of mysterious tomorrows
and awaken stars.

An unexpected me
is breathing now.

Average Thought and Karla Bardanza

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  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    Wow, wonderful write guys! I loved the fresh choice of words in this piece, very deep and heartfelt. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 13 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Brilliantly written!!
    Everything is so perfect!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This was a lovely collab... seamless and perfectly flowing. Word choices were awesome and you blew me away with this one.

    Perfect :)

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    It is an honor to write with you..

    • 13 years ago

      by Karla

      It is an honour to have you in my life.

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