I Loved You.~

Those soft golden eye's,
your gentle tone,
the way you make my skin tingle
with every touch
I Love It All

Please, please don't ever let go
soft touchable skin
your smooth lip...........

I jus tried editing it without adding any more lines or words though i do thin it could use some more lines..What i like about it is how you describe your love, the imagery is just amazing in this piece.

Uhm ya.. i dont really like who its to... but yes thank you :3

Oh wow sis this poem is BEAUTIFUL I love it