Come back my love

by Dmyo Amethesty   Aug 20, 2012


Love..
Everything that I have I already gave to you
Love and sacrifice
Everything that i said and done,only for you
My love..
Can you see that how much that you mean to me??
I will be all that you want..
But..
Love..
I'm sorry..if I feel that you already change now..
Do you still love me??
Or only me love you?
Love..
Please come back to me..
I want you at the first time we fall into each other..

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  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Nice piece! Few criticism:
    ' I'm sorry..if I feel that you already change now' I think no need for 'that'
    'I want you at the first time' I think you may mean 'I want you as the first time...'
    'I'm sorry..if I feel that you already change now' I think you have to change it to read as 'I'm sorry..if I feel that you are changing now'
    This aside, I enjoyed the reading.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Emotions are speaking here
    keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Dmyo Amethesty

    This is what i feel

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