Forever

AWEEESOME!

i loooove short pieces, the saying "little is more" isn't always right buuuut this piece just put a great big smile on my face ( which comes from being a bit of a hopeless romantic)

love it Saff xxx

Short and sweet.

Short and sweet

This is how we want our relationship to be

This piece is so very beautiful and somewhat passionate. To have love like this is rare, but once found we don't ever want to let go.

The title;
I like how you chose to opt for a word that wasn't used within your poem. I think, with the poem being so short, it wouldn't have worked as well as it seems to with the word 'forever'. This word relates and sums up the piece perfectly.

My only critique;
It's too short!! I could read similar lines over and over - but even saying that, you have said all you needed in these three lines, which in itself is a true gift.

A stunning piece. 5/5

When I read this I feel it should be
in the faith and religion section.
God loves us no matter what and he embraces us with his arms wide open.
He is our protector
He is the one, more than I can say about
mankind.
This is my personal opinion
5/5