Imbibe

by MyHalozChokinMe   Aug 23, 2012


I'm the olive in your martini,

stinging from a splash of vermouth,

soothed by an icy sapphire bath,

shaken then spilled.

I hang on, absorbing a few

more dizzying drops.

I'm wrapped in your mouth;

you've swallowed me whole.

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  • 13 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    =) At this point, I wasn't sure how much of myself I really wanted to put out here.

    This is very atypical writing for me.

  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very interesting for your first piece on here. Different to what I thought it would be. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Wow, I'm dizzy from this whirlpool of words.

    I'd much rather lather you in a vat of beer,
    all Ale, pale your complextion and my
    uhem, well, we'll see when shots
    of Tequila and salty lips meet, We'll be
    pungeant, sour, acrid and more as
    the sweetness of our odour's
    imbibe the others,------

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