Comments : Maliciousness (Tanka)

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Have read this several times and the message that sticks with me is that alcoholics can be malicious and mean. Maybe that is because I lived with one for several years and his behavior was malicious at times.

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    Gorgeous tanka my friend.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great work Nitin, words of wisdom of alcoholism!


  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Alcohol not only destroys the person but those
    who are with that person too! This message
    shows the depth of what an alcoholic is..well penned!

  • 9 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Nice one...liked! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Well penned my friend! :D

  • 6 years ago

    by Cindy

    It's so good to read one of your verses again yaar. You did great on this form. Your words cut to the heart. especially for those that have lived with alcohol in their lives....and it is very hard on a family who loves the person. Meena is so right. nice job!