Have read this several times and the message that sticks with me is that alcoholics can be malicious and mean. Maybe that is because I lived with one for several years and his behavior was malicious at times.

Gorgeous tanka my friend.

Great work Nitin, words of wisdom of alcoholism!

5/5!

Alcohol not only destroys the person but those
who are with that person too! This message
shows the depth of what an alcoholic is..well penned!

Nice one...liked! 5/5

Well penned my friend! :D

It's so good to read one of your verses again yaar. You did great on this form. Your words cut to the heart. especially for those that have lived with alcohol in their lives....and it is very hard on a family who loves the person. Meena is so right. nice job!