First Date (Acrostic, Tanka and Quatrain)

by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA   Sep 25, 2012

Fluttery heart beats;
Intrepid love scatters mind;
Recipe of love.
Smiles of pure elation;
Talk, hand in hand, for a time.

Date to last through the ages;
Anticipation released from you.
Tender kiss to say goodnight
Exuding happiness: two.

By A.Sherden

*Club Weekly Challenge #2


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  • 7 years ago

    by Fsams

    "Date to last through the ages" creates a beautiful imagery and the beginning of a long lasting relationship.

    The First Date couldn't be better described :D

    Loved it.

  • Thank you (:

  • 7 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Beautifully written and very, very clever. I find different styles of poetry hard to write, but you totally nailed this! (:

  • 7 years ago

    by Amy

    You know I can never critique your work; they're just so perfect and beautiful! This seems like a really tough challenge, just reading those forms already make my head spin, lol. Excellent.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Wow, so creative, Alisha!!!!

    This is uplifting and heartwarming, a feel good poem if ever I saw one:)


    5/5 Ingrid