A Musing

by Blood of a Lion   Sep 25, 2012


A drunk,
A beer,
A donkey on its way to be reared,
A fellow with a mellowing of broken sighs,
A girl with glee and a distant smile,
A teething of the morning,
A season for the bringing in of a days work,
A year doing work,
A girl no longer receiving,
A touch upon your lips,
A sensation not known but felt,
A drunken stupor for a moment,
A kiss for ones love,
A tastey drinking of ones love,
A smell that you know to be theirs,
A hug to remember you're not alone,
A girl broken and weeping,
A hug does not cure it, but makes it so,
A musing for ones true love.

But is not so.

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    "A girl with a glee and yondering of a smile"

    ^^ The word yondering.. I think it should be yonder because yonder is not a verb.. rather an adverb and adjective...

    A girl with a glee and a yonder of a smile.
    I like the word yonder, first time I see it in a poem.

    "A season for the bringing in of a days work,"

    ^^ This one sounds a tad strange. . .

    A season for bringing in a days work.

    Also the ending, I think it would sound better like

    "But it's not so" instead of "but is not so."

    Content: I might have misunderstood it, but here goes what I understood.

    It seems that depression of a girl might be "a musing" for true love along with beer and being in a drunk state. When someone is sad and with some beers down the throat plus a hug.. kiss.. they might just go with the feeling of not feeling lonely..

    But towards the end, it says but it is not so. Even if during that moment they think that it might be, it is not so.. it probably is the drunken state.

    Sorry if I misunderstood.

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Actually its funny I do all of my poems via a phone typing them out in text and sometimes they come out great other times not so much. Thank you for soul. It was delicious.

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