Embrace

by Thomas   Sep 25, 2012


Tossed are you
into the tub known as my body
You try to swim and reach for air
but the flow of emotions
just keeps dragging you down
The water of emotions
feels warm and soft on your porous skin
The longer I hold you
the more your body is saturated
with my desires and wishes for you.
And when you finally find the strength
to reach the surface and gasp for air.
There will be nothing but solacement
and the cold, hard world.
The world that will judge you
for the fact that you embraced me.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    I was honestly intrigued through this whole poem, you left me wondering to where this piece is going to end.

    Its different in the way you expressed your feelings, but at the same time I can still say this is written by one.

    And that ending statement, OMG T .. it was just so powerful!

    Keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    The world that will judge you
    for the fact that you embraced me.

    --
    and then no way of return if anyone is jugded by the whole world...
    I love this statement, it is final...
    good poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Absolutely intriguing pulling the reader in and making them use their imagination. I love this poem it's sweet and sensual and that's what I like about it.

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