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by Raven   Nov 2, 2012


It sucks,
knowing that you love someone,
and knowing you'll never get that chance again.
It sucks,
when you hear about that person everyday,
someone always brings them up.
Whether it be,
cheating on you, lying to you,
thinking your still together, or just to bring them up.
It's pathetic when every time you cry, its over the same damn thing.
You'd do absolutely anything for another chance.
But you know you wont get it.
How they pushed you off the face of the earth,
and just walked away.
Its terrible when everywhere you look there's a memory.
How you blame yourself, because after all,
it is your fault.
You hate yourself, for loving them,
for not listening, for everything.
Face it, your in love.
And it'll never go away, only fade over time.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Shark Puncher

    I have read all of your other poems, and I guess I simply must ask - why don't you ask this person again for another chance? Why are your feelings so strong for someone who has hurt you so?

    Other than that, love is a finicky emotion. I understand where you're coming from when it makes life rather indecisive. I still think you should just talk to this person again, though! You only live once, right?

    Grammar criticism:

    "when you hear about that person everyday," <- should be "every day".

    "thinking your still together, or just to bring them up." <- "your" should be the possessive form, "you're".

    "It's pathetic when every time you cry, its over the same damn thing." "its" should be the non-possessive form, "it's" (it is).

    "But you know you wont get it." "wont" -> "won't".

    "Its terrible when everywhere you look there's a memory. " <- "Its" again should be "it's".

    "Face it, your in love." <- Once again "your" should be "you're".

    4/5.

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