Eash jowek ya bent?
Me5de 7abet thyo2 bel sob7?

LMAO 7abet shoo ? hhhhhhhhh she is on medicationn

Too many filler words, but the general idea is powerful and hits home. I wept by the 5th line.

I once loved Kevin too, and let me tell you, he's a heartbreaker. Please be careful, Noura. Be careful because that man will rip your heart out of your chest and take a bite out of it, staring at you in the eyes the whole time like a feral hyena.

5/5

OOOOOOOOMG! NOURA! PERFECTION! I am astounded once again by your writing abilities.

"I need to know what
you're feeling for me, okay? I
cannot stand waiting so spineless
like a whiny pregno
here."

^^^^^^^^^^^
This made me cry.

"Tell me, do you love me?
Do you shiver when I walk by?
Do you
fl***in' imagine me before sleep
and after breakfast
and during your
lonely tea party where
you sit alone by the
windowsill?"

^^^^^^^
This part was surprisingly erotic. I like how you imply that he's thinking about your charms throughout the day, even after breakfast. If you were older, I'd say you should remove the censoring and just go full-on explicit section. But I think that can wait.

However, I would change "walk" to something more special like "strut," "shimmy," or "sashay." These words have more flavour.

"You don't
even like my stuff on FB.
Why the hell am I even tiring
myself?"

^^^^^^^^^^^

OMG SO GOOD! This section brings it back to reality. There's so much emotion. You are the queen of FLOW.

YOU DO KNOW MY WIFE READS THIS SITE RIGHT?

I can see why Kevin is so impressed
He knows a great poem when he reads it

LOL Rab HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH.

* BTW, this poem is fabulous!!! You're a goddamn talented girl

Nice!!!