I'm Sorry

by Craig Rose   Nov 17, 2012


There was once a time,
When even I, was blind,
To the wonderful truth that my eyes now hide behind.
Too little, too late?
Have I caused too much pain, or too much hate?
Or is it all still too new,
These feelings between me and you?
Oh, yes, that must be true,
Because what does red mean,
To someone who was only taught blue?
The people may come and go,
But your memories will always stay true,
In the world so full of darkness,
Sometimes we need a hand.
I'll show you the light,
It is your turn to understand.
But one last time,
I would like to say,
That I'm a little bit late,
And I am truly sorry.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Ohhhh ok, now I see it. My sincerest apologies. >.<

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    If you have rhyming lines throughout your poem, then try to make the whole thing a rhyming poem, like...

    "The cat
    And the hat
    All he dis was eat
    And always land on his feet"

    You know? Make it all rhyme because if you have rhyming lines then the next few dont, it throws of the sound of it, makes it choppy and a little awkward. Or maybe it is just a preference.
    It's still a good poem :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Craig Rose

      I think it's because I put "Sorry." On a separate line and I also changed the pattern from line to line to every other line. If that makes sense. Thanks :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Hmmm, I like the rhyming throughout the poem but usually in a rhyming poems, stick to rhymes. Otherwise it kinda throws off the rest of the poem. I like the red and blue bit... red= love, blue= pain. I like it. And the punctuation... I thought that was a beautiful touch. Makes it short, concise, straight to the point.. good.

    • 11 years ago

      by Craig Rose

      I'm a little confused about what you mean by sticking to the rhymes. Would you mind clarifying?

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