Crossed the line

by Darclyfe   Dec 3, 2012


You crossed the line.
You lie. You made my best friend want to give up. I hate you. In life I can see a new. But you so godless. S-so Thoughtless. I don't know how we wrought this.
There was broken eyes that saw through your lies. He looked like he wanted to give up that night and go to light. Not knowing how feels to fight.
She broke us. In a mentally and Emotional way.
She crossed the line. But she doesn't know how we feel and That we have a Heart of steel..

So she crossed the line But she doesn't know that really. I'm fine,

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  • 11 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    I didnt really think this one was dark. but honestly i didnt know what to do with it.

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Sweetie in the second line it should be "You lied" third line it should be "you're" in the fourth line it should be (in my opinion) "There was a pair of broken eyes that saw through your many lies" fifth line should be "go into the light" sorry sweeite within that aame line i don't know what to tell you... "But she doesnt' know how we feel and That we have a Heart of Steel" should be seperate but other than that my dear this poem is FILLED with emoitions and again it should be under "dark" sweetie 5/5

    Queen Ash

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