Death (senyru)

First of all, this would be considered a senryu, not a haiku. A haiku deals with nature...a senyru deals with human feelings and all that.

I see this as a cry for help... that you are depressed and you want someone to help take it away. :( It's a very sad poem and I hope that one day soon you will be able to have that release of pain.

WOW!
This is short but a deep piece. I could feel your poem.
Wonderful:)