This is a cute haiku,
perfect written my friend

Black clouds burst to rain,
raindrops perch on the eyelids
love infects the air

^

I thought it was good, the only word that made me hmm worry? is infects...

Infects connotation sounds like harmful. And when I think about it, I thought you might have wanted to say something different.

Like "love affects the air"

It sounds more calm. . .

I love the rain, it's so beautiful and calming. This haiku is a very lovely description.

A thought...you could make it a bit more personal in a sense by saying something like,"raindrops perch on her eyelids" instead of
"raindrops perch on the eyelids"

I don't know if that would really make any difference but from nature-ish perspective it could identify with raindrops perching from the clouds rather than from a human eye and the clouds being referred to as her, like mother nature. In a sense it would have a double meaning. I don't know if that makes any sense, it is quite late here and I tend to babble.

* Sorry Amreen...I've edited this out for now and will try talking to you via pm.....it's very hard for me to explain what I meant in my original comment.

I love this poem it so sweet and beautiful...I like the imagery here, you've taken me on this journey with you and I just feel the rain and smell it.

Very soothing...

A lovely piece!! I'm a winter son. I loved the expression "affects the air" it fits in position and makes the poem so inspiring. Thank you for sharing that. I loved it.

And love affcted my heart as I read your piece.Lovely!

So simple yet carries a lot of beautiful meanings.
Loved this piece Amreen :)

Beautifully written, so much said in these few lines 5/5

I like when short poems like this convey a message that is much larger. This one certainly does. Great piece!

Short but great! :) I like it's message! Well written!

Black clouds burst to rain,
raindrops perch on her eyelids
love affects the air.

This feels metaphoric, almost. I can see the obvious natural aspect of it, but it sounds almost like lovers in the rain.

raindrops perch on her eyelids
^This sounded like tears to me, at first glance. And I love how you worded it. It sounds so, strait. I can't find the correct way to work this. It's very proper, old English beautiful, in a way. Maybe I'm over-analyzing, but this is fabulous!

Splendid Amreen!!!

Short but deep. i like the imagery you used here.i didn't quite understand the last line. it seemed out of place to me. but overall i loved it . darkness is everywhere and i think you portrayed that in this poem.