Judged on the outside

by Tiffany s   Jan 1, 2013


Black and blue,
The two colors that show what she has been through,
Trying to deny the thoughts in her mind,
Afraid that she will be left behind
She has been kicked to the curb
and spit on like a piece of dirt
one day you will miss her heart of gold
her path will soon un-fold
a bright vibrant light
shines through the night
as long as it never burns out there will be hope
and life will always end on a positive note

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  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    I like this piece...
    Many people will relate to the sad tone in this story...

    But...

    I like the "positive note" you have switched your poem 'round with.

    The rhyme scheme is good, as is the choice of words used...

    Nicely penned,

    Welcome to P&Q :)