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  • 11 years ago

    by Skyler

    This is funny and sad to me. "Love thy neighbor" was written before we could talk to people worlds away.

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    [Weekly Contest Comment: 1/14/13]

    Everything about this short little poem stood out for me- it had a strong message and the poet has a spiritual heart and mind. There was originality that cannot be overlooked, this poet completely absorbed me in the thoughts of what one would do if Jesus was on-line, and how we would befriend him. Unique and heart-warming read

  • 10 years ago

    by Gwen

    That was fantastic! I think you've just become one of my favorites

  • 10 years ago

    by The Jew

    I have read some of your poems tonight and it seems to me that you are one of the few gifted writers on this site. Although I despise most of the rhyming poetry that I read online yours was quiet captivating at times :) but what really made my write you a comment is that how clever and creative you are with words and images throughout a poem...

    It was great reading you, thanks for sharing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    Fantastic write! flawless and unique. i loved it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rebecca Bentley

    Fantastic write! flawless and unique. i loved it!

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Damn, i never get tired of reading this over and over, this is like ... AWESOME !

  • 9 years ago

    by anand singh

    Very beautiful piece you penned here. In only a few words you got the message out clear and loud. An enjoyable read.

  • 9 years ago

    by Anonymous Me

    I enjoyed this. It is thought provoking and your flow was amazing. Thank you for sharing.

  • 9 years ago

    by yogi73

    Haha! what a clever and original poem, and a bit of a lingering question at the end adds to its charm.

  • 9 years ago

    by Tim

    Truly amazing. Such a great idea to write about, very throughout and thoroughly thought about language was chosen. You're really smart and talented with your approach to writing. May God be with you, friend.

  • 8 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow very powerful. Great write.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    My thoughts on this poem.
    My guess is unless he was a popular celeb, not many would wanna be friends, not really sure if he would treat us the way we have always treated those we met online. He would make a good friend for sure since he would be turning water into wine on weekends and party like no gods. Pizza would be as free as the ocean waters.
    I truly love your idea and interactive way of this poem.
    Goog one.

  • 8 years ago

    by zvikov

    Hehehe, this is a nice poem indeed.

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Really liked this one Michael nice mix of technology and religion

  • 7 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Love it

    (favorite part)
    could He find twelve cyberfriends, trust at least eleven?

    Will the code he writes in be impossible to see
    So far advanced a language, made from infinity

    Where two thirds the hosts of all the net accept His special plea. And the other third reject him, to blind to even see.