Beautiful, the landscape you put behind my eyes is beautiful with magical writting!

I love the imeragery you paint and the absolute truth of it all. for my mom I am drowning and there is no relief but I think I wanna break surface for alittle bit again..is that bad???

Wow! This poem is so sensuous, having good imagery from the beginning till the end...
The very first lines really capture the readers' attention and let the readers replace the main character of your poem...which make the poem quite a unique art and technique, and very thoughtful! Excellent work! Keep writing!:)

Oh wow. Just wow. It's so true. Just wow. I can't even explain it. Just WOW

I love this! It's so true!
~Shades of Gray

This piece is so true, I relate 100% and I love the way you made it sound. The description of drowning is perfect and saying its a relief from life is so accurate. It's a shame you had to know what this feels like, but I'm glad you found a way to explain it; that's something I've wanted to do so many times just never knew how or where to start. Excellent, piece. Wonderful job, though again, I'm sorry to know that you too are drowning.

GREAT!!!!

Nice writtings 5/5

Yeah just wow, remarkable writings. The world is harsh but the best part of it, that life must be kept moving on. Yesterday is a history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift! :)