What Is Wrong With Love?

by Natasha   Feb 8, 2013


Women came in the name of love.
Mother goes because of love.
Flooded toxic orange is your face.
As if your heart is in deep sleep.
Its walled dark and cold.

What is wrong with him?

Leaving his heart to be abused.
Just this once I saw the work
of heaven in the eyes of an airing.

What is wrong with love?

But I will definitely be back.
In a full moon.
To question his love.

Not for him.
Not for anyone.
But for me.
Because I want you.
That is all.

(C) NAC. Natasha~

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  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    A mixture of love and darkness. I loved the way you made the questions in separate lines as subtitles. The last stanza is so deep and full of confidence. Great attempt.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    I like the beggining, well written.

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyler

    Soft-driven, well worded, and heartfelt. Ended on a strong beat. I like it a lot.