by Natasha Feb 8, 2013
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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Women arrive in the name of love. |
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A mixture of love and darkness. I loved the way you made the questions in separate lines as subtitles. The last stanza is so deep and full of confidence. Great attempt. |
by Mohan
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I like the beggining, well written. |
by Skyler
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Soft-driven, well worded, and heartfelt. Ended on a strong beat. I like it a lot. |