The Beauty of Who You Are
by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet Feb 22, 2013
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Hair blacker than the darkest night, |
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10 years ago
by Lemon
So lovely! I'm whoever she is adored this :). You carve an image out of words of a very beautiful, innocent girl and it's clear that you care a lot about her from this poem! :)
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10 years ago
Thank you Lemon. I do care about her dearly. thank you for you kind words. i try to paint a picture the best i can in my poems and sometimes i succeed in doing that. thank you :)
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11 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Aww, this is such a sweet poem, it is very nicely worded with the metaphors and imagery for description and makes the love very unique and not so much cliche.
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11 years ago
;) thank you. I like the metaphors I try to use in poems, especially when I try to describe the beauty of a woman. Thank you for the love
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11 years ago
by Maple Tree
Oh this is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love the concept of comparing her to Sampson and Athena... and the ending adds a romantic and elegant touch, Chris this is wonderful!-
11 years ago
Blushes go around like candy to trick or treaters. Thank you Andrea. I really love this woman a lot. Just trying to show her some love ;)
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