Sun and the Flower

by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet   Mar 1, 2013


Warm is your glow that brightens my morning
your heavenly touch brings a smile to my face,
Always there for me when I need help to grow
shining down on me, giving me strength with your grace,

Soon you will leave me cold
everday at the same hour,
Sweetie I miss you
like the sun misses the flower.

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  • 11 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    You almost hit it right on the head :) the 2nd stanza is not when she goes to work but when I take her home at night and she leaves me cold (especially since its freezing in chicago). yes i do love her and thank you for the love Baby. Ms. Rainbow if you're nasty :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww, this is so sweet. The first little stanza was very happy and warm and then in the second it held a sorrow in it and i wondered if there was something deeper in it? Like insecurity of being left, or simply maybe her going off to work every day and so you would miss her?

    It is very sweet and describes your feelings clearly towards this person.

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