Puddles (acrostic)

by Chelsey   Mar 2, 2013


Pooling in the divot of every pavement,
Ushering waves in the street,
Drowning scum and debris.
Dwindling as the sun rises.
Leaving
Earth
Slowly.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Chels- This poem took puddles and made them glorious... Oh I love this!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Angie

    This is amazing Chelz, leave it to you to write about puddles... I always love to jump in a puddle and get the person I'm with all wet... and it's fun to watch a child play in a puddle, listening to their giggles, and its so sad when the sun dries them up... love this write, brought some old memories to my mind...

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very creative little acrostic Chels.
    My golden retriever loves puddles and am sure would like this poem to end with them never drying up lol.

    Nice to see a little form from you :) xx

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Wow so short yet

    So amazing and true

    I think the words you used
    Were perfection

    "Ushering waves in the street"

    For somthing so average , you make
    It so beautiful with this line,
    Great imagery in such short lines

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