Acceptance (Shadorma)

by Baby Rainbow   Mar 25, 2013


Don't love me
unless you accept
who I am,
what I am,
all that I will ever be
and have ever been.

Saffie
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20/3/13

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  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I love the short yet sweet message of this poem. You don't love me unless you love everything about me lol. I gave you my heart but you can't take it So take me for who I am. I love the shortness of the lines as they flow so well together. The wording is so great. The first line as so much power to it though. Its just jumps out at you. Again the message is strong if you love me love me. I will not change for anyone at all. As well you shouldn't. Be who you are no matter what. That is the point that I see here. I love it !! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild Flower

    I love the message of this piece, and the wording fits te form perfectly.
    Awesome job =)