Beautiful Smile

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 2, 2013


The only therapy that my mind needs
is the sight of your beautiful smile.
The only thing that can erase the doubts inside
and wipe out all my fears.
My reassurance, when
paranoia comes to the surface
and hallucinates with frowns.
That curvy line upon your face
turns everything else back straight.
And your beautiful smile is all I need
for my own smile to return.

Saffie
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  • 11 years ago

    by Odd David

    A very nice read

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Sometimes all it takes is a smile from that special someone to brighten your entire day. Sometimes, even seeing other people happy turns my whole mood around, even if I don't know them.

    Smiles are reassurances that no matter what, everything is going to be okay. <3

    Wonderful pen, dear!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    A smile from another beautiful soul is the best Therapy of all... this is beautiful Saffie!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    Ok...I like this enough to come back with another suggestion...don't mean to take over your poem but...I spent a lot of time as a copy reader so...I see things that authors sometimes miss...

    The only therapy that my mind needs
    is the sight of your beautiful smile.
    The only thing that can erase the doubts inside
    and wipe out all my fears.
    My reassurance, when * Your reassurance and I'd put that separate for the rest of the poem...give it a line of it's own for it's a huge statement
    paranoia comes to the surface
    and hallucinates with frowns.
    That curvy line upon your face
    turns everything else back straight. * back..Mmmm strange word to use..I'm sure you can find a better one?
    And your beautiful smile is all I need
    for my own smile to return.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thanks for that - edited it around a bit. x