Hurt

by nichol   Apr 8, 2013


For once I felt alive.
Into your trap I took a dive.
I wasn't looking when I found you.
With disappointment I thought I was through.

Your radiant smile captured my soul.
But your intentions were dark as coal.
I never should have opened my heart;
because what was left, you ripped apart.

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I like the flow of the poem it was to the point, showed true emotions (which a poem does need no matter how little or how massive), and it rhymed great job hun! I have one comment though when you are done with one sentence in the poem put a comma instead of a period that's just my mind besides that you're golden keep writing you do have potential 5/5

    -Mori

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