Mirror

by nichol   Apr 8, 2013


I look in the mirror,
the answers are clearer.
I can finally see,
all the pain you caused me.

You watch as I fade,
consumed by your hate.
You laughed as I died,
to savor your pride.

How could you up and leave?
How could I be so naive?
It was you I could trust,
but you were in it for lust.

I look in the mirror,
the answers are clearer.
I can finally see,
all the pain you caused me.

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I have one suggestion and you don't have to do it but I will still do it for you if you would want to take my advise and it is this: make the first and second stanzas in the past.

    "I looked in the mirror
    the answers were clear,
    I could finally see,
    all the pain you caused me,

    You watched as I faded
    consumed by your hate,
    You laughed as I died
    to savor your pride,"

    it's just my opinion since you already put "laughed" in the second stanza I just think it looks better that way but it's just me I love the emotions and I would leave the last stanza like it is I enjoyed the emotions and I bet what he did or didn't do is quite painful great job hun 5/5

    -Mori

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