Comments : Brat

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I'm majorly eye rolling right now, and you know exactly why! :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Athanael

    Thanks, in spite of its poor quality, I appreciate it

    • 12 years ago

      by Jenni Marie

      Shut up you, and get off my page.

  • 12 years ago

    by Athanael

    Well you were the one asking me to comment on it, not my fault you cant take constructive criticism lmao

    • 12 years ago

      by Jenni Marie

      Baaaah.

      You already said you liked it and laughed on Skype, no need to try and pretend otherwise here.

      Now shut up already, go take your sleeping pills.

  • 12 years ago

    by Athanael

    I can't recall that, might have just been some attempt of mine to encourage you a bit haha

  • 12 years ago

    by Athanael

    I can't recall that, might have just been some attempt of mine to encourage you a bit haha

    • 12 years ago

      by Jenni Marie

      You can't recall that because your time is taken up with incessant yapping.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    There is only ONE brat in my mind that came up when I first saw the title haha...just kidding!

    I like the rhyming and insistent pleading is exactly what he does so... this fits him....plus I hope he feels all the love you have for him too :p

    • 12 years ago

      by Jenni Marie

      Bahahaha. It fits perfectly! I love how you guys knew straight away who it was aimed at- (See, you must be a brat then eh Sassy?)

  • 12 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I loved the flow to this poem. I think this is a good style for you to write to. I loved this part

    his mouth never stayed still
    bet the only thing to keep him silent
    would be a dozen sleeping pills

    5/5