Leaving You

by Sammie   Jul 2, 2004


In the beginning all you wanted was to be with me.
Holding my hand was always important.
Never walking around without me.
Making sure no one was bothering me and trying to get with me.
You always wanted to hold me close and never let go.
You loved showing me off to everyone you knew.
You were always impressed by me, and you always thought i was beautiful.
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Months flew by very quickly, sadly but surly I saw a change.
All of a sudden I wasn't always with you.
You rarely even held my hand.
You started to ditch me.
You started not to hold me close to you.
Sure enough you stopped showing me off to everyone.
You become discussed with me and didn't even liked the way I looked.
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Now I'm lost....... I thought I was yours!?!
Now I'm never with you
Now you never hold my hand.
Now you ditch me all the time.
You never hold me close and now you don't even care, you don't even show your feelings and how much you care.
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How couldn't I see this.... I was used by you.
And I let you win.
You really hurt me cant you see?
In loved you and thought it could be
Only you and me...
I guess I was wrong... Oh So Wrong..........

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  • 19 years ago

    by Million Tears

    hey i really like the pattern of the poem!!!! every stanza changes the mood and the the story..... very orginal!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hey, this was a really good poem, I felt your free-verse style certainly was interesting. I have yet to read any of your other works, so I might regret this comment, as it is being said out of ignorance, but have you considered trying out a structured poetry style? I think you would be able to use your considerable skills to make a great poem, even one constrained by a set rhyme and rhythm.

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