I dont understand

by Aubrey   Jun 20, 2013


I don't understand what's wrong with us
How to help fix us
I don't understand where everything went wrong
Tell me please
So I can understand
Is it me?
Am I not good enough anymore?
Do I need to change?
What so wrong with me?
I don't understand why this is happening
How im losing u so quickly
it feel like a hole is getting punch in my chest
I feel my heart starting to break
I feel the tears burning my eyes
I feel the harder I fight for u
The more u slip away
I don't understand
So please tell
Where did it all go wrong?

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  • 10 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I loved how you connected with the reader by asking questions, that was nice. This is a sad piece but i liked how you want to resolve the differences you have with this person, how you just want to make it ok again..i enjoyed reading this though i would encourage you to polish up by doing some editing here and there esp on the punctuation

  • 10 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    So sad but written well

    You shouldn't have to change just be yourself

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