This was good, it really makes me wonder what happened

I love the description you used, wonderful work, i love the way you wrote this!

This was a neat write and I liked how you weren't constricted to stanzas or anything, this felt more raw, like you just spilled your thoughts out....

There was a definite atmosphere of nostalgia, from only knowing that one kiss and maybe wishing it had never happened so you wouldn't wonder what could be. I also feel like your sorrow is there because it's impossible to be with this person again..... for whatever reason. Good specific with using the actual month, gives more background for the reader to imagine without describing everything. The winter can certainly be a lonely, depressing time to get through.

Welcome to the site by the way, I saw you registered recently!
Take care & keep writing.

I really like this. The emotion and the underlying pain in the words really create, well, sorrow. I like how it is written, different but very nice. Well done.

I like this poem because it makes the reader yhink what happened that December :). Its short and simple but so many words are said :). Great write

I like it. There is a lot of subtle pain etched into the words. Really captures you.

I like the rhyme. It works really nice but in some parts it is a little sketchy. Need a better way to organize it to make it flow a little better.
Try putting it into lines and that might help.

Sounds like a deep depression. Youre pretty good. You stayed on the same subject and I could tell the pain behind it. Youre good, dont stop because you got alot of patential.