Unspoken

Nice...beginning with the last word of the previous line...good efforts. All the best

There is sadness in this and despair leaps from your words.

I may be wrong but I think this type of poetry is link poetry (starting the next line with the last word of the previous)

A couple of nits and suggestions,

'cant' in line 11 needs and apostrophe.

I think you could also drop a word here and there such as 'this' in line 2 and 'that' in line 3.

I'm also not sure about line 4. You start with 'I' which sounds correct, (eye- I) but is wrong in the context of the rest of the poem. However I see the problem that it is difficult to start with 'eye' rather than 'eyes' which would also be wrong.

My suggestion is this;

'Eye that see's no sense of reason.'

It is just that though a suggestion, it is your poem after all.

thanks for sharing.