Blow

Really nice poem,love how you can put so many emotions in such a small number of words.Keep up the good work!

Wow, very raw thoughts and emotion in such few lines... I'm sorry if this is true and you are feeling this, no one should have to go through this depression, and thinking the end is all there is coming. Keep your head up and keep holding on. The opening line of not being able to forget what you've done really struck me because it's hard to put our past behind and ultimately, forgive ourselves. Know you have worth though, even if you don't see it now. It's incredibly easy to punish ourselves, mentally and physically, because something may now be out of our grasp but we can become better persons, the person we want to be proud of, not focused on what others define us as.

Keep writing.