My night with rusted dented armor.

A nice poem, but had few grammatical errors. My suggestion to you on your future poems is to use your spell check and proof read them before you submit.

4/5

Wow Lovely poem.
And my lips form a smile at the sight of yours
You make me believe in fariy tales

nice lines.

Wow thanks :)

Awwwww I love this poem so much, it is so sweet and caring and full if passion and love, loveeeee it!!! I nominated it I hope that is okay :)

I like this poem a lot at it shows your true love for this person. I'll help you with the spelling but its up to you to change it.

In the third line. Worrie should be worry. Disappears should be Disappear. The fourth line touches should be touch.night should be knight.

The second to last line could say I'll be with you forever that way it flows more nicely with the poem.

Otherwise I like it alot like I said it truly shows how much you care for this person. The imagery is so fantastic. I can see the smile on your faces when you see each other and feel your heartbeat. 5/5