The flame

by SimIsSeiko   Aug 9, 2013


I was a fire, I was a screaming flame.
I burned with a passion and no one stood in my way
I was hotter then the sun. And drove away the rain

So why do I find extinguished coals?
In my heart in my life in my soul
a world that was brighter then ever
Is now only gray

I was a fire, a passionate flame
But I broke and shattered like glass
The day you walked away

i never knew love was that strong

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  • 10 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I love how you decribe yourself as a fire. Love can trulyset your soul on fire no matter who it is. The line I was hotter than the sun is a very good one as it shows the reader how love can get. I think you ddescribe rain as depression or sadness and the sun as happiness. When you feel happiness you can drive away any sadness you feel. Its hard when sadness comes back strong. It truly its you so hard there is nothing you can do. Sense you were talking about fire you could say ashes instead of coals, because ashes are more gray in colour. Love is truly strong no matter what and yes even that can shatter. I love the message and wording you bring here. Love can make you float on a cloud or bring you down and shatter. 5/5

    • 10 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      Thanks so much James, and your right ashes do sound a lot better

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