Whiskey

by Svetlana   Sep 9, 2013


All of my tears could not make this right
If love was the day, your admission is the night
Those words ripped out my heart hurting me forever more
My feelings for you die as each teardrop hits the floor
Whiskey you can't make this go away
Once I felt your fire but now I just feel betrayed
Whiskey you'll never make this right
Once I thought I had a future but now I know I was blind
Whiskey you can't make this go away
Once I felt alive but now all I feel is raped
Whiskey I'll never love you again
I'm afraid this is the end

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  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Good work! sounds like the battle with the bottle has touched your life in one way or another, I can relate.... Relating alcohol with love and problems, seems odd to relate alcohol with love right? not really, in this modern day alcohol is involved in almost everything. Fantastic write.

    5/5

    Dean.E

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I love the emotion side to this. The deeper meaning holds so much sadness. I love how you put your feelings out right away with the tears falling. Not loving you is tough. It hurts so much I understand it well indeed. I love the imagery here though. You are hurt and your tear drops keep hitting the floor. Your heart may be broken now but that will nevet last. time really does heal all wwounds. I also understand alcohol well too. It wont make the pain go away at all. Love always makes you think of the good times you all had and thats what makes it more difficult to deal with. This always seems like the end but its really not. You are strong. 5/5

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