Hurt

by Svetlana   Jun 16, 2013


I met someone online
A sign of the times
He had big brown eyes and a great heart
He felt just like love
I had no fear of losing
But for him I wasn't enough
My heart took quite the bruising

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  • 12 years ago

    by Tim

    This is good :) there's no doubt that you have gotten your point across. Well done.

    The poem to seem a little off balance though. I think this was due to the first two lines rhyming and the rest not rhyming. At the beginning it feels like the start of a small sonnet type poem, which sort of loses itself towards the end. - Good job though. 4/5.

    Keep Penning

    Tim

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