New Hope

by Axel   Sep 10, 2013


I just spoke with you today
I said all I have to say
How I love you and all you are
I have to do it
Using other name when I wanted to say
That I love you every day

You have other guy
In your mind and heart
But I will try to clean that
And be your love
I wish you to forget him
But I will have to try
To fill your heart

You wonder why i am so far from you
Its because I cant be right there with you
Cause the world keep me away
But my soul reach you anyway
So I am allways by your side
I never feel lonely
with you in my mind

I wish I could just
Take this fear away
And confess my love for you
But now I can't
Because of the fact
That losing you will mean

I think of you every day
Cant stop doing that
Because with you in my life
I feel so full of joy
Cause you bring me hope
Of falling in love

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  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Axel what a beautiful piece, written well.

    It's hard having to watch on whilst the person you are lusting /loving is with somebody else isn't t? I've been there a few times and it sucks lol.

    There are a few typos:

    'You have other guy'
    ^
    You have another guy

    ^Cause the world keep me away
    But my soul reach you anyway
    So I am allways by your side'
    ^
    I feel keep should be keeps, reach should reaches and allways only has one 'L'

    All in all a good write.
    Em

  • 11 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Cute, but also sort of sad. Loved it anyways. :)

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