Why Did She
by CandyMan Sep 26, 2013
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The longing for love leaves an empty space in my heart filled with the deep desire to love, love for the one who makes me blush and cry from pure joy, this hole now filled with darkness consuming me more every day, making me hate everyone in my path, love turned to hatred in mere seconds, my love for her is gone, replaced by the empty abyss of hate, she is nothing but the next guys flirt and the next enemy on my list |
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10 years ago
Well then you never loved her anyway, that is not love..
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10 years ago
by Alanis
Lovely poem, I think it flows at a steady pace, leaving no room for boredom, my only critique is that it comes to a bit of an abrupt end, other than that, you r an up and coming poet, well done, keep writing
